Sunday, November 23, 2008
My Toulmin
Claim: without the help from the people obama cannot save America.
Warrants: Obama is just a human being, even though many consider him to be their savior.
Backing: " change as come to America"
Evidence: " this victory is not the change we seek. it is the chance for us to make that change".
Warrants: Obama is just a human being, even though many consider him to be their savior.
Backing: " change as come to America"
Evidence: " this victory is not the change we seek. it is the chance for us to make that change".
My speech
On the morning of November 5th of 2008. President elect Barack Obama gave a victory speech upon his election as the first African American president of American. He spoke about issues such as, developing new opportunities for the children of America, and to restore prosperity and promote the cause of peace. The most famous quote that i can recall states "This victory alone is not the change we seek. It is only the chance for us to make that change". Many Americans consider Obama's victory as"The change that as come to America", but many fail to recognize that the change as yet to come. Individuals who look to obama as the savior, not realizing that he's just a human, as a lot to learn. In order for obama to change problems such as the economy, and the declining of educational progress, the changes as to begin with the people. Obama can only do what he thinks is best for the country, but without the help from the citizens, America will continue to face severe problems.
Obama's victory speech
Data: Barack Obama the first African American president elect of America.
Claim: "This victory alone is not the change we seek. It is only the chance for us to make that change".
Warrant: its the time to put our people back to work and open doors of opportunity for our kids".
"To restore prosperity and promote the cause of peace, to reclaim the American dream and reaffirm that fundamental truth, that out of many we are one".
Evidence: "and above all, i will ask you to join in the work of remarking this nation, the only way its been done in America for 221 years--block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand. what began 21 months ago in the depths of winter cannot end on this autumn night.
Backing; a quote from Abraham Lincoln, " we are not enemies but friends.." "through passion may have strained, it must not break our bonds of affection".
Claim: "This victory alone is not the change we seek. It is only the chance for us to make that change".
Warrant: its the time to put our people back to work and open doors of opportunity for our kids".
"To restore prosperity and promote the cause of peace, to reclaim the American dream and reaffirm that fundamental truth, that out of many we are one".
Evidence: "and above all, i will ask you to join in the work of remarking this nation, the only way its been done in America for 221 years--block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand. what began 21 months ago in the depths of winter cannot end on this autumn night.
Backing; a quote from Abraham Lincoln, " we are not enemies but friends.." "through passion may have strained, it must not break our bonds of affection".
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