Tuesday, October 21, 2008
Summary of my Toulmin
The claim of my argument was based on how close Hillary and obama were during the election. I supported my claim with the backing form CNN. The Cable News Network reported that Hillary followed Obama to Florida to help with his campaigning. While obama and Hillary were in the election together they both were seen on various occasions smiling and whispering comments in each others ear.
my toumlin
Claim:
Hillary and Obama became very close during the election.
Backing:
On CNN news it was announced that Hillary followed Obama to Florida where she helped him with his campaigned.
Qualifier:Hillary with drew herself from the election, so Obama could have a chance of winning.
Warrant:
Besides the fact that they are both democratic. Hillary Clinton likes Obama personally, therefore that is the main reason why she is supporting is campaigned.
Data:
Hillary and Obama are both democratic
Rebuttal: If Hillary and her supporters stop backing obama he could have a good chance of loosing, but if they continue his chances of that are low.
Hillary and Obama became very close during the election.
Backing:
On CNN news it was announced that Hillary followed Obama to Florida where she helped him with his campaigned.
Qualifier:Hillary with drew herself from the election, so Obama could have a chance of winning.
Warrant:
Besides the fact that they are both democratic. Hillary Clinton likes Obama personally, therefore that is the main reason why she is supporting is campaigned.
Data:
Hillary and Obama are both democratic
Rebuttal: If Hillary and her supporters stop backing obama he could have a good chance of loosing, but if they continue his chances of that are low.
The argumentative essay titled "Hillary made Obama better Candidate" claims that Obama was made a better presidential candidate because of the help of his former competitor Hillary Clinton. The essay was supported with useful backings. One of which states that Obama's fund raising network became more extensive, and his television and radio
advertising from the late fall of 2007 to June 2008 increased favorable after Hillary had with drew herself from the election.The essay also contain interesting data, "the poles shows that Hillary Clinton's speeches at the national convention, brought fourth strong support and campaigning for Obama. The essay also included warrants that states "Mr. Obama is a stronger candidate today thanks to Mrs. Clinton's pursuit of the Democratic nomination". to support its claim along with a qualifier that states "airing issues about Hillary last spring gave Obama the time to develop effective responses, so he would be better prepared for post-labor day when the general electorate began to focus on the election". But overall the essay's main objective is to convince its audience that Hillary is the main cause for obama's major successes in the election.
advertising from the late fall of 2007 to June 2008 increased favorable after Hillary had with drew herself from the election.The essay also contain interesting data, "the poles shows that Hillary Clinton's speeches at the national convention, brought fourth strong support and campaigning for Obama. The essay also included warrants that states "Mr. Obama is a stronger candidate today thanks to Mrs. Clinton's pursuit of the Democratic nomination". to support its claim along with a qualifier that states "airing issues about Hillary last spring gave Obama the time to develop effective responses, so he would be better prepared for post-labor day when the general electorate began to focus on the election". But overall the essay's main objective is to convince its audience that Hillary is the main cause for obama's major successes in the election.
Toulmin
Claim:
Hillary made obama a better candidate
and democrats should be glad she stayed in the office.
Backing:
Hillary didn't quit until after the primaries were over after that,
Obama's grassroots organization grew stronger across the nation.
His fundraising network became more extentive, and his television and radio
advertising from that late fall of 2007 to june 2008 increased favorable
recognitions for him in the states.
Qualifier:
" We now know that airing such issues about Hillary the primaries significantly benefited mr. Obama in the general election.
airing them last spring gave Obama the time to develop effective responses, so he would be better prepared for post-labor day when the general electorate began to focus on the election".
Warrant:
Hillary Clinton is causing Obama to succeed in the election.
She is also earning him numerous voters who were once her supporters.
Data:
Mr. Obama became a better candidate over time as he was tested, and retested, in the key head-to-head debates with Mrs. Clinton.
These debates also made him more prepared and effective when he debated against Sen. John McCain than otherwise would have been.
Rubuttal:
"Anti-Hillary pundits repeated about the damage Mrs. Clinton was supposedly doing to the party that have now been repudiated. The first is that she hurt Mr. Obama by attacking him for being inexperienced, and for his connections to Rev. Jeremiah Wright and William Ayers".
Hillary made obama a better candidate
and democrats should be glad she stayed in the office.
Backing:
Hillary didn't quit until after the primaries were over after that,
Obama's grassroots organization grew stronger across the nation.
His fundraising network became more extentive, and his television and radio
advertising from that late fall of 2007 to june 2008 increased favorable
recognitions for him in the states.
Qualifier:
" We now know that airing such issues about Hillary the primaries significantly benefited mr. Obama in the general election.
airing them last spring gave Obama the time to develop effective responses, so he would be better prepared for post-labor day when the general electorate began to focus on the election".
Warrant:
Hillary Clinton is causing Obama to succeed in the election.
She is also earning him numerous voters who were once her supporters.
Data:
Mr. Obama became a better candidate over time as he was tested, and retested, in the key head-to-head debates with Mrs. Clinton.
These debates also made him more prepared and effective when he debated against Sen. John McCain than otherwise would have been.
Rubuttal:
"Anti-Hillary pundits repeated about the damage Mrs. Clinton was supposedly doing to the party that have now been repudiated. The first is that she hurt Mr. Obama by attacking him for being inexperienced, and for his connections to Rev. Jeremiah Wright and William Ayers".
Friday, October 17, 2008
Wednesday, October 15, 2008
Me glad fe se's you come back bwoy,But lawd yuh let me dung,
Me shame o' yuh soh till all o'
Me proudness drop a grung.
Yuh mean yuh goh dah 'Merica
An spen six whole mont' deh,
An come back not a piece betta
Dan how yuh did goh wey?
Bwoy yuh noh shame? Is soh you come?
Afta yuh tan soh lang!
Not even lickle language bwoy?
Not even little twang?
An yuh sista wat work ongle
One week wid 'Merican
She talk so nice now dat we have
De jooce fe undastan?
Bwoy yuh couldn' improve yuhself!
An yuh get soh much pay?
Yuh spen six mont' a foreign, an
Come back ugly same way?
Not even a drapes trouziz? or
A pass de rydim coat?
Bwoy not even a gole teet or
A gole chain roun yuh t'roat.
Suppose me las' rne pass go introjooce
Yuh to a stranga
As me lamented son wat lately
Come from 'Merica!
Dem hooda laugh afta me, bwoy
Me could'n tell dem soh!
Dem hooda sey me lie, yuh was
A-spen time back a Mocho.
Noh back-ansa me bwoy, yuh talk
Too bad; shet up yuh mout,
Ah doan know how yuh an yuh puppa
Gwine to meck it out.
Ef yuh want please him meck him tink
Yuh bring back someting new.
Yuh always call him "Pa" dis evenin'
Wen him come sey "Poo".
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