The argumentative essay titled "Hillary made Obama better Candidate" claims that Obama was made a better presidential candidate because of the help of his former competitor Hillary Clinton. The essay was supported with useful backings. One of which states that Obama's fund raising network became more extensive, and his television and radio
advertising from the late fall of 2007 to June 2008 increased favorable after Hillary had with drew herself from the election.The essay also contain interesting data, "the poles shows that Hillary Clinton's speeches at the national convention, brought fourth strong support and campaigning for Obama. The essay also included warrants that states "Mr. Obama is a stronger candidate today thanks to Mrs. Clinton's pursuit of the Democratic nomination". to support its claim along with a qualifier that states "airing issues about Hillary last spring gave Obama the time to develop effective responses, so he would be better prepared for post-labor day when the general electorate began to focus on the election". But overall the essay's main objective is to convince its audience that Hillary is the main cause for obama's major successes in the election.